Anyway, last time on Battlestar Prometheuswe basically got the plot of the miniseries regurgitated incorrectly to us; with the events of the canon three-hour backdoor pilot being twisted out of order, mixed with random plot points from the 2004 TV show, and every major character being given the Ctrl-C+V treatment with characters from X-Men. Title: Battlestar Prometheus Author: Ruin Queen Of Oblivion Topic: Battlestar Galactica/X-Men Media: TV show/multimedia comics franchise Genre: Sci-Fi/Adventure URL: Battlestar Prometheus Critiqued by Crazy Minh & Major Wade Hello Patrons, and I hope you've had a happy 2020 so far! They were last used to launch Galacticas last squadron of Viper Mark VIIs. Guess hes in charge.. thought now a hunter from another word has landed on the planet for a hunt which will shock. Roslin centric.Roslin/Adama pairing. I have a passing familiarity with X-Men, but the only thing I know about BSG is Cylons = bad. All of us myself, your mother, the other members of the X-Men, we wanted to make it better for Mutants.. Its only slightly longer, but its a lot bulkier and roomier. Mister Secretary, weve got someone on line for you, the Captain says coming in, breaking the tension, and Xavier nods, wheeling into the cockpit as the captain hands him the communicator. Cause I dont remember a Sean in this particular scene from the canon show. That was in confidence! If there is a need and relevant consensus for additional fan fiction-related articles, contributors are asked to create these as subarticles of this page. Facebook. As a side note, it would be prudent to note that this replacement for Apollo cannot canonically exist as the child of Rogue, as pointed out by Bats in the last riff. Addendum to the scene in "Guess What's Coming to Dinner" in which Starbuck and Roslin discuss the Opera House vision. And it keeps on Growing. War Crimes. Lt. Please R&R. Sagitara - Acropolis, Prometheus, Sentinel Scorpio - Pegasus, Andromeda, Phoenix Taura - Cerberus, Atlantis, Endurance . Terms of Service. During the events of the 1st Cylon War, the mechanical Cylons were constantly evolving and improving themselves. The worst part about this story is that it takes the idea of the X-men and mutants being part of the BSG universe, then does nothing with it. The Battlestar Prometheus was the first of the new Nova Class Battlestars (the most advanced warships ever created by Humanity) to be commissioned into the Colonial Fleet.The Prometheus was a historic ship, undertaking a number of historical accomplishments in her service including: the location of habitable worlds right for colonisation, the re-discovery of Kobol, first contact with another . As she gets out of her Viper, she is approached by James, who is looking very unhappy. Well, thats one thing that hasnt changed over the years, Xavier laughs. Your mother did it out of loyalty to Libran, even after all the fighting we did against the Colonial Fleet, especially on Sagittaron, a lot of us where afraid that once the Cylons where defeated, things would go back to the way they where before., My mother would kill me for telling you this, but she once told me something, Alicia says. So, yes: there is a mystery about who the twelve Cylons are, and how many infiltrators are in the fleet. Proudly serving the community since 10th of March, 2005! Battlestar Wiki guidelines on non-canonical information restrict the creation of fan fiction-related articles. With that, we come to the end of. Reply . No. I doubt it, Marie says. I dont see how a Viper can get caught in the launch tube. to the Hybrids, the topic of this little aside. Caprica, do you think we can make it? Sam asks. Im afraid Ive got confirmed reports of nuclear strikes against several colonies, and unconfirmed strikes on the others, Xavier says, talking to the other people on board the Elysium, this announcement is met with despair from the other passengers. That sounds like what youd call moon spiders in Kerbal Space Program. Its regurgitation that forms the problem in so many crossovers that come through this library. time. tag as part of the riff, but the story is not written this way. Hello Patrons, and I hope youve had a happy 2020 so far! Battlestar. Also, I still cannot see Cyclops as Starbuck. scene which the author is regurgitating here, it was a fault in Starbucks Viper that meant that the Landing Signals Operator aborted the launch. Wait a minute, who put you in charge? James Maddrox asks, getting a glare from Xavier. Its, strange, Im getting reports of equipment malfunctions all over, the Battlestar Ulysses had a complete shutdown before being destroyed., An entire Battlestar? Marie says, looking at Jean. Like getting a proofreader. UmOK, so I think I need to explain what a Hybrid is here. Even now, waiting on the hangar deck for Bill to finish organizing the recon mission, she wants to dance, to sing, and do very unpresidential things to the man standing a few feet away from her. Colonel Howlette, start searching for a munitians depot, something that we can use to arm ourselves, Marie continues. I started this a long time ago. The Hybrids are also sentientor so it is assumed. Welcome to the Battlestar Galactica Wiki! Groups - Battlestar Galactica Fanclub Mind Screw Space Opera with Cyberpunk and Speculative Fiction elements. I need a Viper squadron ready to fly when we enter the fight, Marie says. The links provided here are for the convenience of readers and contributors who would appreciate reading or playing in these non-canonical resources. Uh, Elysium, I could use a hand over here, Alicia says kind of sheepishly. Its actually [Insert corresponding X-Men Character Here]!. Hes also one of my favourite characters, and I heavily object to him being replaced like this. The Civilians stop in front of the Raptor. The writers of the Gemicon series left and started a new series at Battlestar Central. DEAD SILENCE "The Galactica has taken heavy damage to her port side." Commander Tajalle. Please check your browser settings or contact your system administrator. In her Viper, Alicia pushes forward the throttle, her eyes darting over the DRADIS console as she spots the missile in front of her. But the attack was really fucking sudden! Canon!Adama never tells Gaeta to find any space traffic, and I think all he tells Gaeta to do is to give him a sitrep on the system, and to find where the main fight is going on. the plot with additional lore details and with a lot of details changed or entirely replaced. Disclaimer: I dont own X-Men or Battlestar Galactica. This gave me the idea of modifying an old Galactica and updating it to fit in with the new.So,. Its a bit late to comment now, but has anyone else noticed the blatant tense shifting thats been going on in this story? Captain, were picking up something, Jubilee says, tapping her wireless. Colonial Warbook. In fact, she hasnt exhibited any personality traits. Who required mobility and other stuff that their human creators could do. Tell DaCosta and his deck gang that I want the Vipers refitted and ready for battle.. The President's life is in jeopardy and it's only a matter of time until it's too late. tsteuten. They are propelled out of the tube via a catapult system, with no thrust from their engines. Lieutenant Forge, I want to know of any space traffic, friendly or otherwise.. How dare you tell him that she spoke words at one point! Shes then killed off in the second season. Theyre capable of speech, but they seem to be unaware of the world around them, only rattling off a long diatribe of what seems like vaguely philosophical statements interspersed with computer code and status reports. Marauder Class Bomber (D8) Minerva Class Frigate. A) I have no qualms about using the Not! However, by the fifth or sixth episode of season two, we already know that theres only eight infiltrators in the fleet, and weve seen six of the twelve models. Lt. Karl Helo Agathon is Boomers Electronic Combat Officer, or ECO. Unlike the prologue, this chapter heading means nothing. Forge, this guy pops in my head. Also, they want to know why they're all girls in space now. Action stations, action stations, set condition one throughout the ship, Logan says speaking into the phone, people are rushing around across the ship, most of them hadnt even been in combat before, as he sets the phone down he looks at Marie. The fic hasnt been updated since 2013, and this is the last chapter published. Third off, the Catapults are old tech, but I dont see how that means anything. So I one time heard about this BSG fanfic where the Colonial government has contingency plans after the Cylon attack and they have a backup fleet if Not!Adama is meant to be Adama, shes doing a shit job at it. You really did make a difference to her.. Meanwhile en-route to Caprica, the Viper MK-VII fighters are moving on schedule. Mostly BSG 2003 canon typical elements, CWs provided for content atypical of the series. Then we get this: Mister Secretary, Im getting another message on the same channel, the Captain of the Elysium reports to Xavier as he wheels in, the Captain hands him the printed message. Confirmed Renegade, The Captain says. Ive been Crazy Minh, hes Major Wade, and thank you for reading! [ special] , , , , , . We start with yet another authors note. Insert telling-not-showing statement here. As a purist of sorts, I think the quoted parts of the story should be, yknow, how the author wrote them. reported as the Prometheus trembled under her feet. How much damage was dealt to Caprica? Another asks, more questions, People, please, calm down, I dont know anything more than what Ive told you, Xavier says, pushing his wheelchair back to try and get away from the mob of questions. It also doubles as an acronym for the television series itself. Media: TV show/multimedia comics franchise While Hotpoint did write a reasonable story in XSGCOM, there were many opportunities for creating a much better Stargate/XCOM crossover that he didnt take. However the explosion leaves the Viper damaged and left floating in space, but its pilot still alive. Yeah. To do honor to the office of the President of the 12 Colonies of Kobol, Irene says. [Insert BSG Character Here] tags, theyre not to say that its wrong that the BSG characters have been replaced with X-Men characters. battlestargalactica. Open fire. I mean, just look at our current world, and how bigotry still exists regardless of any of the various civil rights movements of the 20th century! Good fanfiction is all about doing something new with the . Gaeta is responsible for the DRADIS, not communications; and thus Forge is also not responsible for communications. An older blind woman with short brown hair, wearing the trappings of a member of the clergy. Cannonball, let me know if anything shows up on DRADIS., Not reading anything yet, Sam reports, Jubilee breathes a sigh of relief, then the DRADIS begins flashing. Comments: Dead Fic, unfortunately, and pretty short. I dug out a folder of old fics and decided to post some of them. Vitaly_Portnov_406. Towards the back of the crowd, Robert Kelly Not!Baltar is looking around nervously. An experiment that has seen humanity create robotic servants that then rebel and push mankind to the brink of extinction dozens or even hundreds of times before. It was only when they reached Ragnar that she got ammo for her main guns. Im your Guest Riffer, Crazy Minh, and with me is Major Wade! Instead of ninety vessels (which I might add are not all Battlestars, some being support vessels, and others lightweight combat ships like cruisers) being the approximate size of the fleet,r RQoO has now made the fleet 120 ships strong. Do you have any way of taking it out?. There are no guns involved, only their missile launchers! Anyone reading me, my systems are down, repeat, all systems are down. Prometheus. Being one of the three only . The mother was in the toilet. ", "LEADING THE BSG UNIVERSE IN KEEPING THE FAITH ALIVE", "THE SITE WILL BE GOING THROUGH MAINTENANCE FOR THE NEXT COUPLE OF DAYS", " ON JULY 1, 2023, THE BATTLESTAR GALACTICA FAN CLUB CELEBRATES 23 YEARS! If theyd actually given these replacements their personalities and backstories from the comics, and not just done a search-and-replace on the games of BSG characters, then theyd have actually written a story that wasnt shit! All right, we have three spots free, heres how were going to do this,, Not!Helo says. With every fiber of my being, Irene finishes. Status: Complete. Various brief essays about Colonial culture, battle tactics and aliens. Internet - Chris Reyes ("Atolm") No. This page was last edited on 25 September 2021, at 20:38. The seventh is revealed in Season 3, and those models are the leaders of the humanoid Cylons, the Cavils. 2604: To Waste A Thousand Words Chapter 4 and5, 2602: Predators and Prey: Chapters 4, 5, and6. Please, Ill pay you, get me off this planet, I have cubits! One of the civilians shouts. Officials advise using New Horizons Boulevard as an alternate route. In the X-Men canon, mutants are highly feared by many members of society, or are treated with distaste. Title: Battlestar Prometheus Gods save us all if the Cylons are that powerful, Marie says. Id love to see a story where the events of BSG are significantly altered by the presence of mutants. Administrators and other contributors may deem it necessary (as appropriate to wiki policy and guidelines) to redirect, move, or delete fan fiction articles that appear elsewhere in the wiki without notifying the original contributor. Yes maam, an officer says, passing the message down to the hangar deck. Everyone is going to get a piece of paper with a number on it, we are going to draw three numbers and whoever has the numbers drawn will get a spot on the Raptor. Galactica was being converted into a museum ship. Battlestar Galactica: Dark Exodus by Stephen Dunlap (453K) - Cover Picture; Battlestar Galactica Series of Stories by Eric Paddon It was a different time, Xavier says with a sigh. Powered by, Badges | What, were they repainting them and polishing the hulls? Battlestar Prometheus - BSG01 Gunstar Argo - GSR0101 CO: RADM D. Tajalle XO: Cdr. Umno? An encyclopedia based on the Battlestar Galactica franchise that anyone can edit! This statement makes me really doubt whether the author has seen BSG or not. She doesnt show it that often, Xavier says. RQoO does know that DRADIS (Direction RAnge and DIStance, the BSG version of Radar) has a relatively short range? She and her partner Mystique also raised Rogue, for what its worth. It is currently under the command of Colonel . Hes also human, and hes flawed, just like everyone else. Theres not much worth commenting on- other than the sheer waste of potential from this fic- and to be honest, the first chapter is where most of the nonsense came from. battlestar prometheus fanfictionjack paar cause of death. Cannonball, keep an eye on DRADIS, let me know if anything changes.. While we've done our best to make the core functionality of this site accessible without javascript, it will work better with it enabled. Thats a quarter of the Battlestars in active service Scott says. Oh, and that DRADIS sweeps have to obey relativistic physics (i.e. About; Author Endorsements; Barracks; Dictionary of the Damned; Scam Site Warning; The Enlistment Office; The Snark Crew; 2603: Battlestar Prometheus - Chapter 2 Oh, and there was no name given to the Battlestar that got all its systems shut down. 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